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Here is a poem with plenty of similes. The trouble is, they're all as dull as dishwater.
Who is she?
She seems as tall as a tree
I feel as small as an ant
She seems as frightening as a lion
I know I'm shaking like a leaf!
She seems to roar like a giant
I sound as quiet as a mouse
But I hope she's really as gentle as a lamb
Because sometimes I behave like a monkey
Who is she?
She's my new teacher!
It's a good idea for a poem, but the similes are… well… a bit boring. They're the ones people use all the time, so they don't build interesting pictures in your mind. Try adding your own words and phrases to make the similes more interesting. Like and As-As have changed the first two lines already.
Who is she?
She seems as tall as a towering sky scraper
I feel as small as a kneeling ant
She seems as frightening as __________
I know I'm shaking like _____________ !
She seems to roar like ________________
I sound as quiet as But I hope she's really as gentle as ____________________________
Because sometimes I behave like _________
Who is she?
She's my new teacher!
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